Is this good?

Question:

Is this good?

dont say i need conseling. i just write poetry!

i cut my wrist
i watch me bleed
i hope to god
it doesnt sting.

i cry my tears
iwash the pain
flow down my arm
through my veins

i drip on the ground
and saw my pride
in half
on my crazy life ride.

i lie here
on my back
to cut my wrist
and stab my back

i see my life
go whizzing by
before my eyes
i am lost, deep inside.

so now i lay
my life down
so i can be lost,
and never be found.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

i like the part with bleeding, it is like life that is passing away, like a wind that is blowing, and you can*t do anything about it