Tell me what you think of this poem please! (after dots reads 'see me here, to y

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Tell me what you think of this poem please! (after dots reads 'see me here, to you I am nought but a blear)

What??s the difference ??tween us and them?
Where exists the difference hem?
Are we defined, you and me?
Or are we just one harmony?
Can you see both bush and bird?
In deafness neither can be heard
Is there both a light and dark?
They both help to seek the mark
When does river turn to sea?
Where does thigh turn into knee?
Why can??t we not be apart?
Like a pair of coupled larks?
Does there exist another place?
Apart from deadly outer space
Will we someday travel there?
Exist forever in it??s glare?
Surely it could not be so
Surely it would be so low
But in my heart I still have faith
I still belive in your grace
Even if you may doubt me
And may not want to be with me
Though life is young, and life is shallow
I still waste it in your shadow
Waiting for just one small glimpse
Of your face or just a hint
That you might turn and see me also
That you might see me as I follow
And this is how I wait for you,
I hold my breath, my face turns blue
But still you do not..

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