How do you like this poem?? my friend wrote it.?

Question:

How do you like this poem?? my friend wrote it.?

He stayed up all night thinking of her
Thinking to himself you cant have her
When he was done thinking
She was gone and his love
Was forever lost
In a place he called thinking

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

What sort of answer do you want? I've had poetry and fiction published in many magazines and the short answer is that the poem you've put here is dreadful. I don't think it's even a poem. But it's fine to write poetry to help you put your thoughts in order and define your feelings to yourself, poetry doesn't have to be good in order to be useful to its writer. Just don't show it to anyone else, that's all.