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First poem. comments please ;)?

this is my first poem, and i didnt write it for fun. i wrote it to help me through some things in life, you know from the heart kinda stuff. any comments would be great

http://www.lovelandia.com/archive/the_on...


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Kinda long but not bad for first time! Keep it up!