Rate my horror poems 1-10 please need feed back?

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Rate my horror poems 1-10 please need feed back?

this is my second horror poem the first which you can look up on this site is called tonuge of the beast I like this type of writing and want to know if i should continue thank you and here is poem number 2, It is called waiting on the r

Waiting for the r
I exhale, my week
over my sanity
regained.

The light in the tunnel
The happiness it brings
My weekend is here
Waiting for the r

Like a speeding bullet
I am shoved into the pit
slammed against steel
No longer waiting for the r

My body twisted
My head all that is exposed
Trapped between
The platfrom and the r

They bring me a priest
They bring me my wife
They back up the train
And untwist my life
I look to the heavens
And now waiting on god.

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