Question:
Simile Poem...would you rate it?
He's like a stone, cold and lifeless
As emty as shell
He's like an empty cave, dark and alone
As miserable as an abandoned child
So lonely; without hope
yes, not the best but i can only use similes...for my english class[[freshman]]
what do you think?
a bit too emo?
Additional Details4 months ago
yeah thanks [typo] ...
As empty as [a] shell
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Hi Mexicanguy,
Not bad. But why don't you change line three to read:
"He's empty like a cave -- dank and dark."
Cheers, mate.