Question:
Is this poem as bad as my teacher told me?
I want to know your oppinions about it, is it worth more or less than a 75?
The children on the road
drift their gaze they do
to stare at the tower
to the face for a clue
they wait patiently
for the reaper shall weild his scithe
another hour passes
another hour of our life
just an hour
just a day
the fabrics of time
are beggining to fray
the teens on the road
drift their gaze they do
to stare at the tower
to the face for a clue
time has passed quickly
seeming to have flown
unknowing their fate
is set in stone
just a day
just a week
for lost time
they do not seek
the old men and women
drift their gaze they do
to stare at the tower
to the face for a clue
their time is nearly gone
they await the end
if only the walls
of reality could bend
just a week
just a year
that clock tower
is someone's worst fear
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
The great thing about poetry is it's always open for interpretation. It doesn't matter what people think about it, it's about what the poem means to you.