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Is this poem as bad as my teacher told me?

I want to know your oppinions about it, is it worth more or less than a 75?


The children on the road
drift their gaze they do
to stare at the tower
to the face for a clue

they wait patiently
for the reaper shall weild his scithe
another hour passes
another hour of our life

just an hour
just a day
the fabrics of time
are beggining to fray

the teens on the road
drift their gaze they do
to stare at the tower
to the face for a clue

time has passed quickly
seeming to have flown
unknowing their fate
is set in stone

just a day
just a week
for lost time
they do not seek

the old men and women
drift their gaze they do
to stare at the tower
to the face for a clue

their time is nearly gone
they await the end
if only the walls
of reality could bend

just a week
just a year
that clock tower
is someone's worst fear


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

The great thing about poetry is it's always open for interpretation. It doesn't matter what people think about it, it's about what the poem means to you.