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Just one of my many poems...?

As I look out at a misty, foggy ocean??I wonder about what death feels like??Are souls released from this world, full of misery??to end their suffering? Is it a blessing of eternal rest? Or is it a misfortune? When I'm gone, and my soul is somewhere??drifting across the ebony skies??Will he even care if I'm gone? Would he be depressed? Or would he be emotionless? There is only one way to find out, for tonight is the night, that I will breathe my last breath??and as the blood from my wrist drips down??if he was right their, would he stop me from my suicide? Would he just let me die? Or would he save me, and say that one day, he will love me again? I'm going to miss this world, but I'll never miss all the misery, and regret that came with living??Goodbye,??.I'll be with you in my eternal rest??

its not good, but im only 11...lol please give me your honest opinion...also, about the "...." i changed it...but i was lazy...so i just coppied my old one..lol


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

uh yea jus dont do any thing stupid there are alot of people out there and yea good vocab but try sumthing a little lighter and try to find some one to confide in and let them help you eith your problems