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What do you think of my poem?

your on your knees
i have a gun
don't you wish you could turn and run
you wondering what i will do
man this really sucks for you
you begin to cry
you know why
you try to bargain
its a waste of breath
i get money for your unfortunate death
ill see you in hell
is the last words you will yell


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I think that it sounds like a poem a villain in a comic book would wright. Deadshot is one that came to mind when I read it.