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What do u think of this poem??

I wrote this poem it came to me:
Dear Reader,

I am writing this letter to say goodbye.
I can??t stand this wretched life anymore I??m living a lie.
Pretending to be happy, pretending to live.
I have nothing to offer, nothing to give.
So I figure why not end my life.
It??s not like my death will cause you any struggle or strife.
In case your wondering if I ever cared for you.
I did more than you??ll ever know, but you didn??t thank me for the things I do.
So I stopped trying to impress.
In this letter I tried to express.
That I was more than a ghost, I was real.
Even though you never noticed me it??s no big deal.
They say a person is never known till their dead.
I guess I??ll find out when you find my lifeless body in bed.
Goodbye for I will miss this dreaded strife.
But it??s time for me to move on to my after life!

Forever yours,
Shadow
(this is not a real letter just a poem)


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

omg!!!! i love it its like totally awsome!!