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Poems by me..please read!?

Just as flowers slowly perish, just as our love??Flowers slowly wither away, lifeless on the cold winter's ground??For our love is just as flowers...Beautiful and stunning, at first glance??However, our love slowly dies??and we are together no more??One day, I'll be with you once more??Maybe not in this world, but nirvana??As the cold wind blowing my glamorous ebony hair??I hold a lustrous knife in my hand, as I feel the pain??and as crimson blood drips from my wrist??I know I'm going to be with you??.

i'm only 11 please give me your opinion

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3 months ago
Kim...I'm really 11...im dead serious...
I know these kind of things because...
I used to self harm...i cut my wrist...
so if thats one thing..
i always had an amazing talent for using many different words..sooo yea....=D


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Somehow I doubt an 11-year-old honestly wrote that.

I know there are some intelligent kids out there but this is far too deep for a kid to really know and understand this stuff. Especially at 11.