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Yet another poem i wrote... interpretations welcome?

I??m Cold

I??m cold from the inside out
So guilty, so found out
You don??t see what I??m giving up
Seeping from every inch of my skin
So frozen heart of ice
How can I wonder about things like this?
It??s all so sure, so happy, so warm
But I??m so far away, so cold
So guilty, shouldn??t think this way
Sitting alone so you don??t have to know
Protecting you I reject your help and your warmth
I??m so cold inside and out
Just hold me
Ignore what I say
Let my tears cascade off your chest
You don??t need words to hear my heart
I??m so cold
Just pull me close


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I am not sure who this guy is but you got some real rejection going on there. I have read several of your other poems and they all carry the same thread of being lonely especially in his presence. I am sensing deep regrets and lack of closeness in your relationship. I would say that he does not give you the affection or the love you seek so badly. Did you have an affair that you are feeling guilty about? It is apparent you feel emotionally abandoned.