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What on earth is this guy trying to say with this poem?

a guy i like wrote a poem, and posted it on his myspace.
What does it mean? we r both 14. I find it really confusing
Only Lust I Can
Never Will I Know
What Could Have Been
If I Couldn't Show
The Way That I Feel
The Fights That I'll Take
If I Wanted To
The Trust I Would Need
If I Told In The Dark
The Doors Are Clsoed
Nearing Rot
The Fright I Would Feel
If They Burst Open
Revealing Half Of Me
I See You
But Cannot Have You
I Know You
But Can't Intwine
The Forbidden Fate Towards You
Locked
So My Doors WIll Remain Shut
My Fists Left Clenched
I'll Take That
And Keep This
And Cherish The Rest


thanks in advance


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It sounds like he's lusting after a sister, or maybe a sister of a friend, who he feels he can't touch.

And he needs a lot of practise in getting his thoughts down clearly and concisely.