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Position:Home>General - Arts & Humanities > Do you like my poem?Question: Do you like my poem?With you tears of fear, rolling down your tear striken face, you think of the tears you have shead over the years and the fears you have shaken off, turns to pain the rain in your brain turns to shame, while the world is in pain you lay there in vain. Your all alone, in your home even though you surounded by the ones you know how you feel on your own or in your home! Additional Details3 months ago Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
The idea is nice, but you know that poems don't necessarily have to rhyme. Use more metaphors, similies, descriptive words. |