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So, tell me what you think of this poem I wrote?

She tried to swim away from the darkness as fast as she could, only to be grabed by despair, to be swallowd whole by the heart of misery who had a hardy appitite for girls who looked to sorrow and pain as their only friend. Happiness is but an evanescent mist that tried in bitter vain to cover the lonliness that blackend her heart.


I wrote it a while back and I'm very proud of it. :-)


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

exalant
but be more international
will be better
dont stop