Question:
Do you like my poem?
When i say goodbye,
it's done with pride.
There is pain all over the world,
A child lays there crying when the world is slowly dieing,
slowly unvailing its pain and covering the inhabitants with its vain.
They say were killing the world but in fact its the other way around,
the world is unleashing its fury with floods and diseases and other unknown causes.
But today I have to say goodbye,
and i will do it with my head held high!
Additional Details3 months ago
I have wrote this for Dick who has lost someone very dear to him! I am sorry for your loss!
3 months ago
Please ignore the spelling mistakes!
3 months ago
Please tell me why you like it or why you dont like it!
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It's OK. The spelling isn't good and line five makes no sense at all. Also you need to use proper punctuation in your writings as they become nonsensical without it - for example "They say were killing the world", surely you meant "They say we're killing the world"??