A poem called LOVE FROM ABOVE I made?

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A poem called LOVE FROM ABOVE I made?

I felt swet when we met on the palm of my hand her face as beautiful as the promise land. My angel I guard my soal feels hard If I gave her a kiss the magic Iwould miss from the moment it was over. I give her my heart for ive been hit by cupids dart I give a hug and feel light as a new made rug I know now that are love is from above? I hopew you liked this poem I made it my self.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

hmm... the feelings are very raw. It's like you wanna capture a moment by writing those lines. One thing though, isn't that supposed to be ... that our (instead of are) love is from above. Good poem though. Keep it up!