Will this rapping poem help me relate to kids?

Question:

Will this rapping poem help me relate to kids?

I'm part of a group that is lecturing underdeveloped kids at a school about my religion crap and all of that stuff.

I want to relate and I know rap is a big thing, so....

Please tell me what you think;

Yo
MC Lokie on the rap
and you'll like it
here is a story
and your sure to like it
swift and sly and playin'it cool
with my home girl
Amber

Yo
yo
uh
you
yo
damn it

holla if ya hear me
yeah!

Will this work?

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

rofl

No one gets it except me. Lovin' it. It's a surefire hit.