Please, read and tell me what do you think ?

Question:

Please, read and tell me what do you think ?

i want to live but i will die
i always smile but inside i cry
it's true we all lie
truth hurts who can deny

i love to love and i hate to hate
but people make it easier to hate
silly faces everywhere i wish i could read anyone's mind
evil spirits here and there i wish i could feel thier hearts inside

i have been hurt,disappointed and brokenheart before
but i promised myself i won't let it happen anymore
life is unfair and full of pain
things will never be the same again

from this moment i won't shed a tear
from now on there is nothing i will fear
trust no one ,only my voice i will hear
i know i will become stronger year after year

i pray and pray every hour every day
GOD please help me to find the right way
i guess there is nothing else i can say
loosers get ready you hurt me and it's time to pay

Additional Details

3 months ago
i know i am not a good writer but i hope u like this

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Could be a song. Why not try being a lyricist?