Question:
Please, tell me what you think of my latest poem?
Midnight Falls
by: Adam Snow
Walking alone in a cold forsaken world are we. The blood for
which you lust falls upon my lips. The shadows surround us on this dark forsaken night. Holding your hand as the midnight moon shines upon us thru the midnight haze waiting for the midnight song of darken desire. You left me to fade away in this midnight murky haze as my blood drips upon your naked soul. You abandon me for the midnight haze as you slowly fade out of my life. Now alone am I in a world gone cold. This is what you have done to me.
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Love it, deep, dark and moving. Can feel the pain and anguish of loss.