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My feelings in some kind of a poem kinda,what do you think?My hearts already broke so go for it .lol?

Ode to Saint Michael,

Here I sit in limbo. A place I know so well.
Up the street and to the left of hell.

I bounce off the walls from all time and space.
I can??t go very far from this place,

Wallowing in self misery, trying to drain some form of relief from this sponge.
Drowning in my own punishment from your love.

I hide beneath my everyday life, I have to trudge through
False words of hope, and art and beauty, no joy in these things because of you.

You set me free not so long ago, came back to make sure the torture was working, not enough you said,
You tighten up the rope, around my heart, and head.

Choking from all the reasons you give of why it can??t be,
God the thought occurs maybe you are crazier then me...

I close the door, and shut off all the lights, alone I wait in the dark
This time I offer up a prayer for your sanity also, maybe all long I have missed the mark.

If you can??t join me in this so called real life,
Maybe in the place of insanity, there I could be your wife,

I was told in life it won??t always be good, or right
But I wake and see the morning light; yes there always is a light

It holds me up keeps me alive, for what??s it worth,
Shows me I do have a fighting chance to keep going while im still on this earth.

Maybe in you is the answer, I wait for the solution, the key
I know the answer, the only answer, that would be for you to just give up and love me

3 months ago
yes its not a happy poem..it was made to release some of my pain and try to move on.But i did ask for peoples thoughts.

First of all,why would you you want to allow someone who would hurt you so much still have power over you?I can assure you that he is going on with his life and you should do the same. The poem you wrote is so full of self pity and you really should do the oppisite,become the person he would least expect. Be happy that he taught you what you don't have to except.