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How is my poem?

journey to my Heart

you know how to treat me
you know how to love me right
noone can ever beat you
you'll always be part of my life

SO I hope you know you've got a precious tool
I hope you know you have the map to my heart so you can..
Jouney to my heart ..anytime you please
Journey to my heart..you've got the keys
Journey to my heart....anytime you want
You know I will always be your girl forever and ever and never ever ever stop

I know you'll always stay faithful and true
You always will be mine
I'm never gonna stop lovin' you
even after a long long time


No other man , is gonna come between me and you
No other person is gonna change my mind about you
you will always be mine and I will always be your
nothin's gonna change my mind
nothing's gonna change my mind


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

that was a wonderful poem. you put a lot of thought into it and that is what makes a great writter