DO you like my poem? Anything I should improve on?

Question:

DO you like my poem? Anything I should improve on?

"This is about the Virginia Shooting and I dedicate it to everybody who was affected by it ..."

No warning
No Hope
It all happened
In one quick stroke
The quiet person they all saw
they would never think
he could perform this unthinkable flaw
Stories and plays he always wrote
with killings and hate in every note
thinking about all the people who wronged him
he sent some picture just to get some coverage
And all of us stare wide eyed at the screen
watvhing videos of kids crying
We wished this wouldn't happen again
But all of our wishes got demolished by just one kid
following in the footsteps of Eric and Dylan
" His martyrs" he quickly penned
And he hoped we got the message
But no worries, Cho
we got it loud and clear...

Additional Details

3 months ago
Thanks for the comments so far
I'm 13 and it was really scaring for me for this to happen and I just had to write down everything...

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

You really are a Smart Girl -
good poem - needs a little more work but the basic idea is good.