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Please rate my poem....1-10?

Lie
you lie to keep me happy but it don't help you didn't realize what i felt. and when you lie it makes me sigh, on the outside i'm happy but the inside i'm not. i cry every night and day thinking of what to say, but tomorrow is a brand new day. i cried all my tears away just to hear you say i lied for the best.

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3 months ago
i did write this by myself and i didn't copy anything so why did u write something so negative and had no clue that i wrote this myself who did u think u are going to tell me that i copy this u don't know me?


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