PLEASE REAd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!??????!!!!!!!!!?

Question:

PLEASE REAd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...

Please read my poem and tell me if you like it or not. i have to hand it in to my english teacher on monday. tell me the truth about what you think about it. love andrea

i like tomatos
they are good
i like chimneys
they have cockapaddles

i one ate a doorknob
i like cream cheese
how many states are in the USA?

my poem is reaching an end
i like poodles.
good night
buenos noches
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please be honest! tell me what i can work on. my teacher said the best poem in the class will be entered in a poetry contest. do you think itll be me? and if yes will i win??

Additional Details

3 months ago
a cockapaddle is a type of bird that eats little girls named Haley.

im 67 by the way

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Let me "clean it up" a little for you, just the grammar...

I like tomatos, and they are good,
And chimneys possessing cockapaddles.
I am one who eats doorknobs,
And cream cheese, wondering
How many states are in the U.S.A.
But now my poem is reaching an end,
And because I like poodles, I must now
Say goodnight...
Buenos noches...

Yes, excellent poem! I don't know if you'll win...but keep up the good work...you have a natural talent for it...