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What do you think of this poem?

I can tell you,
It was glorious fair.
They were lit up.
Like a steal of silver from the lining of the clouds,
Or from a spool of grannys hair.
They were colourful,
Like lambent.
Aglow of nature, blues and mustards,
They were in the green.
They were allowing the leaves,
Of a desidious tree.
They were vintage in their grammatical relations,
The blue sky betwean the foliations was-
-Like a string, it was inclining them
To bring. Brillience of Him.
Butterflys in the garden in the height of the spring.

3 months ago
I'm just wondering what your views on the imagry are.

I really like it. I'm fussy too! did you write it?