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What do you think about this poem?

The path

There are path in life
We choose the path
They can be what we
What to be
Their are hills, rocky and many
But they led you to
What you what
you choose what is
right for you


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I think there are a couple of places where you wrote "what" instead of "want" and the first "path" should be "paths".

The concept your poem conveys is excellent!!!