What do you think about my poem?

Question:

What do you think about my poem?

Crumbled heart turns tear into blood
ulcers deep inside becomes human flood
yet your image boosts my ego
my mind enlights from your halo
let us walk on the carpet of divine
as if two rivers, flowing in a parallel line
push and pull
like a boat that floats
pour every broken glass down my throat
my organs can only stand so much pain
after all, liver takes it down the drain

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

My first thoughts are,....... Cho Seung-Hui or "Ismail AX"