Question:
Help wit poem plz!!?
How didn't i know what's true?
i saw more than a sign,
but yet i stayed so in love.
hiding from all those lies.
I guess that no words are enough,
to describe the pain inside me.
I thought you where the one for me,
Can't help but to hate you,
why did you have to lead me on?
I can't believe those tears i cry,
i even cried tears of blood just for you
I still love you
and dont no why,
after all the pain you put me through
cried tears of blood for you
I would do anything to hear you say you love me again,
You promised not to hurt me,
You promised you meant what you said,
you said forever,
cant explain the way i feel ,
cant stop thinkin about you ,
i wanna call you just to hear your voice
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my friend wrote this poem and i need help fixin it
can you help make it better sense
add an ending ,can you fix errors
mix it up make it sound good
plz help she needs it on friday-
just make it sound better
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
How didn't I understand the truth?
I knew all along
but I was so deep in love,
hiding from every lie.
I guess no words are good enough,
to describe the pain I feel.
I thought you where the one for me,
Can't help but hate you,
how could you lead me on?
I can't believe those tears i cried,
but I can't seem to change it
I still love you and can't grasp why,
after all the pain you put me through
I would do anything to hear you say you love me again,
You promised you'd never hurt me,
You promised you meant every word,
you said forever,
I don't understand whats going on,
I cant seem to stop thinking about you,
I just want to know if you still feel it too.
I don't know, but I hope that helps.