Question:
I've made a song. give me feedback please?
Tears of pain are in your eyes
I can sense all the feelings
Come and be with me
Let??s play some music
Get away from the pain
Be strong, Believe in yourself
I know she left in pain
You wish you could get her back
She??s is still with you
Next to you when you are down
And when you are lonely and thinking of her
She knows that you miss her
She??s misses you too
I can see you need someone by your side
I??ll be there for you
Never leaving
Sing like no one??s listening
Dance like no one??s watching
Watch me dance and sing all together
Come and join me
I??m your helping hand
I??ll fill in your heart for you
Just don??t cry no more
No one wants us to be sad
No one wants us to be gone
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
its totally great!! i love it..