Question:
Is this an okay poem?
I gaze into the mirror
And look deep into my own eyes
I see a bit of confusion
Sadness
Mabye a little irritation
This time is a little different
Because through the sea of emotions
I've finally discovered hope
Like the sunshine outside my bedroom window
Hope reflects off my mirror
And into my eyes
I look back into my eyes
Through a different light
I see drive
Determination
The goal to find happiness and meaning
To love and accept myself
And live a life worth living.
<i>I see Alicia.</i>
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It would make a good inspirational desk plaque but honestly, it stinks as poetry. Sorry.