Can anyone help may out with the poem I'm writing?

Question:

Can anyone help may out with the poem I'm writing?

There are times I sit and think
of what we could have been.
Now were done and cant go back
but I still care and want you back.

There are times I lay and cry
looking at the beautiful sky.
and In every cloud I see your face
and wish I could embrace you.

There are times I dream of you,
and wish that you were mine
but deep inside I know and cry

this is all I have, Can you please help out, either make it better and add on. Id really appreciat it and thank you

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I think it is perfect the way that it is.
You "know" because you cry.