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Do you like my poem #3?

i was suppose to write a poem on the topic: hanging upside down. do you think it's good??

Hanging Upside Down
The sky is now green,
Like the grass once was,
The air smells clean,
Just because.
The trees hang low,
The clouds are the ground,
Leaves in wind blow,
The world spins round.
The rain starts rising,
Up to the ground,
But really it??s falling,
Listen to the sound.
The world??s like a place you??ve never been before,
But really it was a hiding secret,
When you turn your self over like a fish that is dieing,
You realize you??re the fish that??s living and that always was.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

cute! can u email me somemore of your work!?
Please!??