Do you like my poem?

Question:

Do you like my poem?

Heart leaking on to paper,
dripping out started later,
Drip drop the heart stops.
You stay living,
even tho your hearts bleeding.
Drying out, shriviling up,
faster and faster without luck.
Then from no where a crow starts pecking,
pecking pecking without a care.
With you soul coming through,
your body your life will end soon but all you can do is lie there to.
But for now all your friends can do,
is to cover your heart with a thousand plasters!

i am 14

please say what you like and dislike!

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3 months ago
ive wrote lots of poems on here b4! look @ them and come back and comment! sometime

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I tried to touch it up a bit hope you like am sorry i was rude am well tired tho but tried to keep your idea in tact. if you like you can say you did it.

My heart is leaking out emotion
devoid of love I feel it weep.
Time again to reflect my feelings.
my tears are bleeding as I sleep

Time moves slowly without company
faster faster it pumps deceit.
Within my soul the angels calling,
will heaven hold a place for me