Tell me what you think about my three poems i wrote, each about this guy and our

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Tell me what you think about my three poems i wrote, each about this guy and our relationship?

Just Friends.I barley even knew he??d exist Thatis until that day in Social studies, when I had a fit.Hehelped me with homework, and our friendship grew strong.But I never thought much of him, I just moved along.Soon he expressed his feeling for me, and yes I wasshocked But Ihad no feeling for him, my heartfelt locked.Still I never even thought twice about him,but I knew hedid for me.there was somethingabout him,why couldn??t Isee.Timewent on,and we were still just friends,I knew he still liked me and I assumedtill the end.But he moved on andgot newgirlfriends,now Iwas theone wishing there was moretimewe??d had spend.Whywere my feelings suddenly so strong forhim?I wish Ididn??t wait, whata punch in the chin.Slowly our friendship grewapart, if onlythere was a button,where Icould just press,RESTART.Himand hisgirlfriend areclose as can be.But still he meanseverything,absolutely everything tome.Hopefully thisdoesn??t continue,all these newtrendsBut cometo thinkof it we willalwaysbe just freinds

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2 months ago
sorry the spacing is messed up, this is the first poem i wrote, as days went on i wrote two others, ill post them too-

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Those are two very good poems.Maybe someday you can make your own book of poems.Maybe one of like a pre teen/teen age kids