Do u like my poem???

Question:

Do u like my poem???

Bang goes the gun,
another bullet towards your shatered heart.
If another one hits your heart will be a million pieces,
ill have to glue it up to make your heart full again.
No one hits you again,
but your brain is weak your going down again.
I pick you up and take you home,
but you dont cry,
even though your in crying pain, that makes you ashamed!

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2 months ago
Im 14 years old! please tell me what you like and dislike bout it!

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

its beautiful, very powerful, there is a real sense of sadness that transcends your words, a sense of a lot more feeling that your wishing to convey. Keep up your writing and your poetry, its a really positive way for you to express yourself.
ps - you have a talent.