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please comment on this poem i wrote
A MORTAL'S CONTENTMENT

A mortal ,
shunned by all ,
was struck upon by the unworded wrath ,
of his worshipped Goddess.

Witnessing her serene grace,
turn into the fires of hell,
left him sorrowful to his very soul.

Blessed and chosen he felt later although ,
for Instead of being ignored as dust ,
was enshrined ,
not in her hallowed heart ,
but at least momentarily in her enraged thoughts .

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Ones thoughts made us feel like this at times, but our souls prevail and sets us free. Great writing. Thanks for sharing.