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Position:Home>General - Arts & Humanities > Hi i was wondering if i could get any opinions, suggestions on this poem i madeQuestion: Hi i was wondering if i could get any opinions, suggestions on this poem i made to make it better please?Blue Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This is one of those poems that is a straight shot from the heart to paper. There's no symbolism here, just pure emotion from pure words. Therefore I hesitate to change anything. Just clean up the spelling a little. |