Question:
Do u like my poem????
Your eyes glisten in the light,
teeth chatter; with the site.
As you stand there there I know your not telling me your feelings,
but slowly your lies spill out.
your about to start.
sundenly your secrets about you love someone else flows out!
Additional Details2 months ago
tell me wot u like and dislike about it
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
it doesnt seem to hhave feeling.
real poetry makes you want to cry when you read it.
real poetry helps you get through things.
real poetry
is not
that.
i diddnt loose OR gain anything from it.