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A poem by unknown. some opinions and interpretations....?

People paper today,
the speed of oblivion is accelerating.
licked a stamp,
and my journey is on the way.
smooth silky flames,
emanating through the back of my eyes.
Divinity?
The more concentration,
the more abstraction,
reality fades into one.
you could be my mother!
yet she stays always hidden.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Poem has several striking and vivid images.
I like the alliteration of "smooth silky"--
Problems with the jerkiness of the lines--they seem disconnected and hard to follow.