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Position:Home>General - Arts & Humanities > Is this a good poem for my girlfriend?Question: Is this a good poem for my girlfriend?okay so my girlfriend let me read her poems and they were kinda gushy... I said I would write her one so here it is shes my girlfriend for only 2 weeks do you think it is good, creepy, or what? Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
its pretty good but try not to use "crude" words like "jerk". and try to make lines that rhyme have the same amount of syllables |