Please rate my poems from 1-10?

Question:

Please rate my poems from 1-10?

I wrote these when I was in 7th grade.

"The Key of Faith"

When the world crashes on you again and again,
you must let the key of faith in.
When it seems all the doors are shut tight,
you must give a big fight,
and show no fright.
Use the key of faith,
and see the light.
The light will shine through the door,
let your fears go,
and fear no more.

"Darkness Will Hide"

Trapped within the walls of fear,
into the darkness she peers.
She looks for one last bit of hope,
but with the pain,
she cannot cope.

Her confidence grows thin,
feels like the hard work has never been.
The tears run down her face,
all failure falls in place.
She falls to her knees and begins to pray,
the walls slowly fall,
for fear is not to stay.
She opened her eyes,
to another side.
Now the darkness,
is the one to hide.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Personally, I have written alot of poetry, and I would give that a 9.5!!! they're great! consider yourself a gifted writer and keep going, you never know someone may be paying you big bucks for one of those poems one day! I got paid $100 for one of mine that I scribbled out in 7th in school one day that my teacher entered into a contest. Maybe add some more dramatic synonims for some of your words and that would make it a 10+!! Excellent Job, keep it up!! And if you need any tips or pointers in the future, let me know!! :)