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Any comment there.......?

soul
i was go on mute
mute coused waiting w/ hopeness
mute coused faithful love
in from bottom of my heart

i was die long time a go
die on pride
die on glory of love
it's killing me so slowly

i was pass way
w/ blood on all my body
blood from hurt heart
blood from sorrowfully
blood from hateness

oh my soul..
couse u....... i life
couse u too.... i die


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

its a nice poem on how to make poetry a little asymmetrical