Question:
My poem..............please read it?
Here in one of my poems...........read it and tell me what you think!
Title: Not enough
Living life has been real rough
Just trying to hold has been tough
Even though i have tryed real hard
It doesn't matter anymore cause i'm already scarred
No one cares enough to see
How all these problems came to be
I'm sceaming so loud to get them to hear me
But no one listens to my frantic plea
Now i know that i'm all alone
And that i no longer belong at home
For no one wants me here at all
But soon you'll regret not listening to my desprate call
I never wanted it to be this way
I just wanted all the darkness turned to day
But no you just couldn't do it
Now my heart will always be a dark bottomless pit
Now i relize the only way to get rid of this pain
Is to end it all by slitting each vain
As i scream aloud my last goodbyes
They finally relize the pain that was held behind these helpless eyes
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
The poem is very nice, but-
I don't want to be the one who regrets not hearing- please tell someone why you are hurting so badly.