What do you think of my story?

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What do you think of my story?

We had met at a young age and ever since the first time he looked me in the eyes and smiled I knew he was the one for me. His name was a little odd but I didn't care I'd write it everywhere. His name was Jevon. We were so perfect together. We were always acting dumb and we were always holding hands. He'd call me four times a night just to say how much he loved me but we'd always end up talking for hours. People would always ask me what I see in him and I'd always reply,"Everything." My answer was always that simple and it was always true. He was my miracle sent from heaven. I loved him so much.
20 years later I'm 32 and he's 33. It's May 28th, 2007 and we are still in love. I still look at him like he's as big as the world. He still looks at me as though I'm all he thinks about. We are having our 20 year anniversary and we are still in love. Let this true story of Jevon and I be told throughout the world. Let it be known that young love can last.

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1 month ago
Yes, it is longer but I don't feel like typing it all. lol

1 month ago
lol yeah i know im still working on it and now that i think about it you are right.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

its okay, but bad grammar and very short, needs more detail- WAY MORE DETAIL- and more events.