Question:
Poem, please let me know your thoughts. Thanks?
Rays of light shine of a summer's morning rise.
Through my bedroom window you sneak in
and wake me with the a.m??s glow.
As a thief you steal me from deep sleep,
caressing warmth skin deep.
Embracing fine white fibers upon this bed
and on my head, a kiss you lay.
Igniting the day, warming my soul
I welcome your warmness.
Will pardon you of a dream you stole.
As you will forgive the creeping night
taking your light.
Rays of light shine of a night's starlight.
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Have to agree with graceful g
A smooth flowing delivery of classical flavours in the first verse gives way to a second verse that is in fact a sonnet very much in the Shakespearean tradition. Short enough to be considered as a whole with clean lines and simplicity of lyrical form. Wouldn`t you agree graceful g?