Question:
Please do read this.. My Goodbye Letter..?
Last Goodbye Letter
I have walked a not a thousand but a million miles in love, every pace struggling to keep my heart beating. I have seen every color the rainbow needs to show, have drawn every twighlight, gone through every storm. Each sunset the sky has to show, my eyes have gathered, with tears unknown. I have loved like nobody before.
Every hello seemed to pass unnoticed, every goodbye is every time the closest to my own destiny to refrain my own last embankment. I have been stabbed not in the back but in my heart, in every memory that now I need to part. Charm has been his middle name, with only a smile, I guess I am to blame.
So here I go one last time, to say I??m through with all this lie, the one that told me every day, tomorrow you will be happy!, and it just went on and on, to my own oblivion.
It??s time to run, time to escape, reach for the Moon, and never fake. Time to leave those childish thoughts and dreams behind, as now I know, the bell rings, it IS time.
And with a pleasant hand shake, I bow my defenses out at stake, go, go! To Rome, the bridge of thought, to all the wonders of my heart, I say goodbye now presently as now I know we weren??t meant to be.
Ta ta! So long, my hours here have passed, and now.. to grow! To discover, my present inside blunder, I??ll see you in another life, and maybe even then write the same words I??m now declaring, you broke my heart, my soul you shattered, I??m gone, my love, I know to you it never mattered. So now I spread my soul and fly to the next boat to destiny, goodbye.
Additional Details1 month ago
What do you think of it? what impression does it give you, please?
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It's beautifully written, but sounds like a suicide letter, which would be better if it didn't. It would be good to phrase it in such a way that there are better things for the heart waiting IN LIFE, and that you will move on to the beautiful things in life, spreading the love inside you to another who is waiting just over the hill, or something like that! :O)