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Can someone actually read this poem and tell me what it is about, best answer gets to be choosen as best,?

Can someone actually read this poem and tell me what it is about, best answer gets to be choosen as best,?

if there are any mistakes or better advanced words can you please put them in your answer by rewriting the poem, thanx,here is the poem,






Outside in the murky,
Laying on the grave,
Unaccompanied in this colossal place,
One living thing left on earth,

Looking for exists,
Searching for exits,
Misplaced inside a world,
No one could stumble on,

A far away foreigner,
Takes me to my place,
The place I wished I could reach,
Please take me to my domicile,

An abrupt luminosity passes in front of my eyes,
Waking me up,
From my worst nightmare,


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

its really good, except for the first line, where it says "outside in the murky" maybe it could just be "outside in the murk" lol