Writers? Need suggestion....Readers? Would you read this?

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Writers? Need suggestion....Readers? Would you read this?

am writing a novel but i am stuck on a relativly vital part of the plotline. Basically, i will tell you what i have so far and then ideas i had. Feel free to make any of your own. Also, i'd appreciate if u told me if this is any good,: The story takes place in a small cretan village in the seventies. It is a double narrartive story of two cousins who grow up together. The story describes in poetic tone the life and panorama of typical cretan villages but also takes the reader within the unseen depths of greek childhoods. Starting off with nostalgic humor, i create irreplacable memories of childhood, then teenage years. By this point the reader feels a tight connection with the characters. Then, as the girls turn twenty, one of them gets invited to study archeology abroad in England, while the other is left behind to grow in the simple life of the village. The theme is leaving your past behind and knowing where your home is. I tie in a metaphor with arheology and digging up your past

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Sounds like an interesting story that my wife would enjoy reading. But, where are you stuck?