Do you like my crap poem?

Question:

Do you like my crap poem?

Spinning of the temple.
Churning of the oven.
Running from the werewolf
through the forest in mist.
The rain washes nothing
as the desert encroaches.
Running from the werewolf
through the forest in mist.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It could be wonderful with a little editing. Take out unnecessary words (for practice identifying these, try a creative writing excessive...cut words out of a magazine that appeal to you, then write a poem using ONLY those words, no "the" "of" "as" "and" or anything of the like. )
Don't be afraid to edit and work at it, I know alot of people who are. If you cant figure out what to do with it, put it away for a few months then take it back out to work on it.